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YAS๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป
So this oneโ€™s kinda meh
I like some parts of it but other parts of it I dislike but donโ€™t know how to fix
The poem is basically about how I like to write about feeling emotions I hardly experience myself but enjoy writin

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Tap if you like brownies YAS๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป So this oneโ€™s kinda meh I like some parts of it but other parts of it I dislike but donโ€™t know how to fix The poem is basically about how I like to write about feeling emotions I hardly experience myself but enjoy writin


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thx:)!
i love this one too!!!
This is amazing!! I love the words you choose and some of the metaphors.
I love the parts abou glittering night skies and
The smooth rivers of moonlit blue part especially
woahhh I love this
i love the deflated balloons line๐Ÿ˜
Thank you :)
i love your writing!!!
:)
thank you
BRO THIS IS SO GOODDDDDD
THE BALLOON BIT WAS SUBLIME, MY FRIEND
all of this is a yes
perfect, straight forward and it just flows so well ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–
sign me up as a fan ๐Ÿ’˜
i absolutely love your poems !! theyโ€™re amazing !!๐Ÿ’• what helps me write is writing about my feelings , basically whenever iโ€™m down at like 3 am i write about my feelings and add onto it what i know from others (this is just my advice in general or just idk what but idk if it will help but i hope it does :) )
youโ€™re welcome !! :) glad i could help
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Youโ€™re username should be I write wonderful things!
omg..... I donโ€™t have words...... this is....... fricking AMAZING!!!
you have some talent! wow this is good. Iโ€™ve read it 5 times ๐Ÿคฉ
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