Oh My Goodness! Congrats on writing and creating such a beautiful and saddening story! I loved the meaning you used for the chosen word, Vision, and you clearly brought it up in many parts of the short story! I love how you used the past and future for then your Dad to say that it was to save her! Wow! If you are looking for something new to do on your account, please continue this story for everyone! That would be amazing! Well Done 😊

OMG wow I can't be love I won! thank you so much I'm so happy you liked it! when I grow up I want to be an author so just wow thanks!

*belive not be love

All good! Winners will be announced after a few more entries!

okay cool!