Collage by sakuracat

sakuracat


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ok, so the first thing I notice is that it’s pretty crowded and hard to read
I can’t really read the yellow text 😫
but I love the girl on the right
I think my advice would be to cut the orange wavey thing and the yellow text, and add a simple, calm background that brings out some of the colors on the girl
or maybe just take out the yellow lettering