wrote this a lil while ago and decided to share 👉🏽👈🏽🦋 also some of your assumptions on the previous post are wiLDly accurate hahaha—revealing them on saturday if you feel like dropping some more. about to go blast some daniel caesar music now 😌☕️

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wrote this a lil while ago and decided to share 👉🏽👈🏽🦋 also some of your assumptions on the previous post are wiLDly accurate hahaha—revealing them on saturday if you feel like dropping some more. about to go blast some daniel caesar music now 😌☕️


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OMGOSH ESTA ES HERMOSA ASTRID 😍 brooo this is actually so beautiful and the way i interpret it is as a toxic relationship?, I've been in a few and they really feel like this. The line "i have drunk your poison whole and i have written it back out" is so amazing
🙌🏽😩 bru ur soooo talented
THANK UUU🙈❤
thank you astrid, you really understand. thank u for the feedback, that means sm to me. thank you so so much😊❤️
“never trade honesty for relatability” wow🥺 thank u for that🖤 i’ll remember that
wowww...all of these descriptions and metaphors and different things...DAMNN. you are such a beautiful writer it’s incredible sjfbndns
ASTRID I HAVENT EVEN READ THE POEM YET BUT I HAVE TO THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR BEAUTIFUL WRITING WITH US IM EXCITED TO READ IT
ok i LOVE your repetition with “it’s all of this” and the lines that start with “it’s the” toward the end 😍 it gives the whole poem a rhythm and a pace that helps push every word forward so that the last line “i am finally free” feels like a release
I’m in LOVE with the line “it’s the blooming of the garden despite your absence” and for some reason I just really love the sound of “back out/ blackened” 🤩
sorry for writing a whole essay 😂
YES I AM ✨SO✨ PROUD OF U
“ words I hand to you in handfuls of cool dark venom”
HOLY
UR A GENIUS
🤯🤯🤯
OML
THIS WRITING IS AMAZING
yours this different on whole other level 😍😍
THIS WHOLE PIECE IS GENUIS
MORPHO BLUES AJDJDJFJFK
this makes me wanna burn all my bridges and move forward
@caption okay but Daniel ceasar really do know how to set the mood😳💕
I think this might be my fav thing you've ever wrote. All these methaphors and it flows so well. I always love the words you use. This is seriously incredible 💕
you should write a book ☺️
tienes un gran talento de verdad, eres increíble y una gran persona... Gracias pir estar en piccolage y mostrarnos tu talento 😇
Your entry for etectera_ 's games is again so good!! It's such an interesting perspective, omg. Your stories always amaze me, they're so original ❤
I DONT UNDERSTAND HOW YOU CREATE SUCH VIVID PICTURES IN MY HEAD
“it’s the dry blood leaving my fingers in the rain” khaksghshavs🤩🤩
your poetry is so deep. it paints the actual picture in my mind and just like sjskskskskka wow
Just a heads up that your first round entry for The Writing Games is due in 3 days!
wow 😍 just wow
um🤩 i have no words🤯