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AH THIS IS AMAZINGGGG (honestly you're a better writer than me. ๐Ÿ’œ)
This is great! I truly did enjoy reading this, thank you for entering! I don't have much to say constructively except that perhaps some of the sentences in the first paragraphs could be lengthened a little. That's something I notice in my writing too, when I try to describe some things I end up using choppy sentences for actions. Other than that, great job! ๐ŸŒป๐Ÿ’•โœจ