part 2

with pretzel bags as their pillows. THIS STORY SO VIVID AND AMAZING, you’re so good!

I mean, I don’t know what else to say but wow. this whole thing is so beautiful, so easy to read and imagine and connect to. this definitely wasn’t what I was expecting for this picture, but I am beyond amazed by it. you are very very talented. I really can’t think of much constructive feedback. I’m trying here. 😂 thank you so much for entering, I loved reading this!

oh my gosh thank you for the kind words!! I’m glad that you think it’s easy to read because I was a bit worried about the length haha, and as always, I really appreciate your writing challenges/writing in general! your whole page is very motivational and awe-inspiring