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yeah it's basically all of the important moments in her life
or at least the ones important to her
thats amazing that you're writing a book
thanks โบ๏ธ I've written before but it's only been short stories
I need to ask you a favor
sure!
I want to make sure the book is as good as possible so could you proof read it
not the whole thing just chapters
ok
I'll remix you the first chapter
the first few chapters will be short
this was intentional because those chapters represent her early life and will eventually get longer as she grows up
you there?
what are your thoughts
I'm going to remix you the other chapters
please tell me all your thoughts and opinions
ok
I just realized I remixed chapter 4 twice ๐
any suggestions for future chapters
there's a time skip between each chapter
I left out monty's first words because I felt like they weren't important to Annalise's story
should I have his first word in there
yes, but you just through it in there with nothing behind it, and that is a very important part in her life too because it can effect her in the future
yes i would put it in
threw*
lol im dumb
and you're right about it being able to effect her future
it's been shown that Monty is clearly the favorite child and this could show how that got started
I'm working on the fifth one
uh what did you think of chapter 4
was it bad
you never gave me chapter 4
maybe something glitched
u prety
Tanner I love you buddy but she's out of your league๐๐๐
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