I love this so much, you are such a talented writer! Such vivid words and descriptions it’s just amazing! I love the imagery and just the underlying sense of suspense and intensity in your writing! So good! I will say this though, there were certain point where I was a bit confused. I know that it’s hard to catch that as a writer because you know everything that’s happening, but there were some points where I was confused as to the characters being referenced and the thoughts being referred to, maybe if you read through it from a readers perspective you might find ways to make it more clear, but other than that I really enjoyed your writing and would truly love to read more of your writing! Thank you so much for entering!

thank you so much for your feedback! I will definitely keep that in mind, and i really appreciate that you organized this it was v fun:))