okay I’ll just pretend I didn’t read part two already and start over 😂

“the streets choke in thick fog” such good setting of the scene

I’m not sure that the “sorry” is completely necessary here, it almost feels like it disrupts the quick flow of things a little

ignore my comment about Teresa on part 2 😂

I love how you can give such short character descriptions and already establish them as a character. so cool

I just adore this setting

I’d say maybe a little bit more description about the other burkas would be really cool. obviously, you were limited on space here so I’m not too upset about it, but maybe like some physical features to help readers visualize these women.