This is really good! I love the plot you have building up. 💕

wow. this is amazing!!!

I have an app called Episode, and in one of the stories is "Femme Fatal" lol

fatale*

And now for constructive criticism (if you don't want this in the future just let me know); Just from this part of your story I can tell you that I would like to see a few more flaws in Bea. She seems like a really intriguing character but I feel that she may not be realistic enough. But I don't know the rest of the story so I can't be too judgy. 💕