Guys pls pls pls tell me if you dont like it ill surely change it im just rlly nervous about this this is the first time im sharing my writing and shít i dont do stuff like this is swear

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Guys pls pls pls tell me if you dont like it ill surely change it im just rlly nervous about this this is the first time im sharing my writing and shít i dont do stuff like this is swear

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I think "Died" should be changed to "Dyed".Other than that it's good, but don't take my word for it because I'm also bad at grammar
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Don't worry so am I.(even though I've spent most of life on it)
I love it
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