so I really like all the individual things in this collage (pngs, text, colors), but I don’t think they’re very well organized. overall, this is a bit cluttered and really lacks structure. unfortunately, this gets a no from me

i'm not really sure what you were going for here? it's kind of all over the place and whatever is going on in the middle is way too cluttered. this is a no from me.

ah peachy agn- I feel this is a little too cluttered and some things are missing so it’s a no for me.