Very long scene haha, oops. Part 2 and some background info in remixes. Also deals with some mature themes, like getting drunk and hooking up, so just be aware of that and don't read it if it makes you uncomfortable or if you're too young.

CreatingPoetry

Very long scene haha, oops. Part 2 and some background info in remixes. Also deals with some mature themes, like getting drunk and hooking up, so just be aware of that and don't read it if it makes you uncomfortable or if you're too young.


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THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!
this is so good🤩😫
tyy
so good
tysm btw this is so good!!
whoa holy moly, the fact that this has been translated from English back to Dutch and then back to English whoa :00. we never saw the full story, but this scene was already so good, I’m interested to see what the original plot was. it must’ve been an experience looking over it again, but hey it means you grew as a writer :D
MAN HES NOT GONNA BE THERE TOMORROW THO THAT HURTS MY HEART
yes I’m definitely obsessed about the plot 👀
re:// honestly same though, most of my poems are just me trying to make sense of my thoughts haha. and you’re right, it’s okay for it to not be okay, and I shouldn’t try to shove all my feelings under a rug and pretend it never happened:)
LOVE IT
thank you!
this is so cool!!!
aweee tysm!! how are you?
you are welcome:))
wow this scene is so descriptive and detailed! I admire Ash’s protectiveness of her.
ofc!! I always love reading your writing!
this is really beautifully written, I think I fell in love with the story itself (would love to see more HAHA no pressure btw) and yea agree with what kat said earlier ^^ it’s pretty cool how u can just do that and I rlly admire your writing skills as well. both parts are rlly amazing and the plot itself was kinda unexpected at the end, rlly thought that the main character would have just walked away lol but that’s boring ig..?
definitely love the part where the main character was like thank you? for what? that part, I felt a strong connection lol
thank you <33
WOOOW THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! IM SO INTRIGUED!
AHH CAME BACK FROM PT 2. SCREAMING. CRYING. You are so talented at what you do.
AND THE GROWTH. It must’ve been wild. I hope you never stop writing because your writing is exceptional
I LOVE THIS!! It’s so descriptive and the dialogue is so good 💞
AHHHH PART TWO
If you post more of this I’ll definitely read them!! I love the plot already :D
omggg tysm!!! how are you?
Tysm anouk!!! ❤️
thank you so much!! it’s definitely different but omg it was so fun to make 😆
this is amazing!! hru?
Thank you! haha that’s what I was going for but estimated wrong since ‘feel’ is just hanging there. And you’re very welcome!
Awwwww thank you!😊
tysm!!!!💗
you latest << is pending <<
thx:)
Thus story was super intriguing and I really want to know more! All of this is super detailed and really descriptive!