omgosh this is amazing!! you should totally continue this!! I wanna know what happens now 🤭😍

Ahh, I just love reading your writing, you’re so good! I’m totally invested in the dynamic between these characters! I love what you did with the switching perspectives, something unique and interesting to read! There were some points where the transitions could be a bit smoother, but overall I loved that you did that! Also, one thing that I’d suggest is maybe adding some more descriptions about their surroundings? I know it’s hard to focus on that when you’re writing something that short, but I think that could definitely elevate the story and make it come to life more. Like I said before, I love your writing and the characters. The dialogue is great as well, thank you so much for entering! ♥️