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holding a flower every time you go out, I LOVE THAT!
it’s interesting to see her relationship with her father show itself in little hints here. I love how you do that
a plan years in the making, now I’m really interested! but it’s almost over! ahh
ZEUS IS FALLING?! at a circus?! Astrid I NEED MORE
I WANT TO KNOW MORE
holy moly this is so good! gotta try and come up with something like constructive criticism, hang on I need a minute
I will say the ending sounds a little bit rushed, but given that this is a short clip of the story I can’t really be too upset about that. it kinda feels a bit abrupt to me
also, I would have loved to hear just a little bit about why/how he cut off other parts of her body. that’s not really criticism though, I’m just curious 😂
also, I feel like maybe I’d give some sort of hint as to what’s going on before the very ending. just to even out the story a bit, so it’s not so end heavy
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