An untitled attempt at first person narrative. I'm debating over whether or not I should continue to write it. Just for a little bit. What do you think? Do you like reading first person or third better?

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An untitled attempt at first person narrative. I'm debating over whether or not I should continue to write it. Just for a little bit. What do you think? Do you like reading first person or third better?


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*ignore all of the grammatical errors*
*could not find any* Yes, DEFINITELY keep writing this! I really love how when you write it paints such a detailed picture in your mind👏 I'm just in awe.
Please, continue! As she said, this story just screams imagery! I can see all of it in my mind, and the words you use, once again, are anything but dull! This had me sitting on the edge the whole time! Who is this Finn? We can only find out if you continue ✨
I love this! I tend to enjoy reading 3rd person more because it's usually more detailed, but this is absolutely fantastic!
Everything you write is magic. 😌🌿 I'm also trying to test out first person, though you seem to be doing better than me. 😂❤️☺️
thank you so much😄😊 as are yours💛 and of course your writing is just marvelous👏🏻✨🌙
wwwoah:) super mysterious...totally continue it!