Glad my tips helped!! And yes, I'd love to read it if you finish :)

English isn't my first language either, so that shouldn't matter haha

I'm doing pretty good I guess, life's a bit weird because of covid and the lockdowns and stuff, but yeah. How are you?

whoaa aya I love this it's so good best collage you're the goat

and it's never too early to be getting ready for the holidays smh cD

XD

and ahh my love life is not better than yours don't worry xD

I'm an awkward mess irl, no I

I'm awkward online too what am I thinking lolol

but honestly tho platonic guy friends are a must haha

no drama usually, I don't like cat fights it's just stressful and I avoid all drama ;-;

I totally agree yes yes

My brain and my gut are just constantly fighting each other in every way possible haha. My brain says :" NO DON"T DO IT" while my gut is like "BUT- I MUST"

and ty my busy lady. What is sleep? My weekend sleep schedule is a mess. lol

If I remember, you're 7 ish hours ahead of me, so we're like a full sleep schedule behind ahh

Oh man so those are important tests/finals huh? They have to find an alternative if cases rise. You can't be forced to go to school if you don't feel safe.

Online school is alright. I'm used to it since I took some in my previous semesters. Some classes are easy and some would be better if it was in person.

AHAHAHHAH THANKS AYA

bro thank u🥺

yeah skl started:( hbu:(

ohhhh it’s pretty good my state is the only place in the world to fully eliminate corona after a second outbreak😳💅

OMG AYYAA

THIS COLLAGE LOOKS AMAZING THE HECK

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT

MAKE MOREEE

I DEMAND

😡😡

No, I'm actually Dutch haha. I've learned English at school and online and by reading books and stuff :)

If pc is fixed I'd love to see what you've come up with, I'm sure it'll be good!!

Yeah, I do love horse riding!! I do it every Saturday :)

Hmm quarantine has been feeling like forever honestly. Lots of free time. I've been writing and reading a lot and I like to bake or go on walks. How's your life?

FGDgfd thank u so frigin much i-

^^^ew that has to be the ugliest keyboard smash

its from the the musical something rotten

but you still get a cookie bc ...why ... not ...🍪 🍪 🍪

its from the number g0 d i ha te shakespeare ( https://open.spotify.com/track/4wCot8w7pamCw8PQOvOgda )

No it's not that bad. I am majoring in public health.

What are you interested in studying?

oh and i just posted the art if ud like to see

like one of those big fancy words indeed 🧐

Oohh are you planning on sharing some art on here? I always loved to see it!! And it's still so great that you're starting to accept yourself more :)

Actually I live in the Netherlands haha, Dutch means from the netherlsnds

But dutch and deutsch are so similar it's a super common mistake haha. But that's still close to france indeed!! I've actually been in france a few times :)

Now for your poem, I'm super intrigued by it. I really want to know how it goes on. The idea is great and it's really pulling me in. You do use did a lot and it would sound better if you just used happened instead of did happen. Also I think the flow could be better, but that's something I often struggle with too. But its like some parts are longer than others and it just doesn't flow really easy, if you get what I mean? I sometimes try saying it out loud to see how it sounds and then at some parts or erase some words until it has a bit of a rhytm. But I'm so so excited to read all of it!!

🎵its about- the rEnaisSanCE🎵

HI THIS IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL

Yea same! Science, particularly biology was my fav! I’m good with blood and all things. I’ve seen some stuff haha

ooo do you want to work in surgery?

OMG HI YOURE BACK SKFBRHJD

I HAVE RETURNED FROM THE GLITCH YUHH

I MISSED UUU HOW R U

ALSO SJFHEHS TYSM🥺🥺 UR SO SWEET OMG

Oh no how will you be a surgeon ?

You can tell what my opinion is from the most recent post on my extras account :)

Thanks for the questions!

ahhh I know T-T

remix was our thing!

it's still not fixed for me yet - so saadddddd

boy trouble is too much for me rn hahahahha

AwKwArD me can't handle this

but how are you aya, I miss you and pc better fix this bug because it's soooooo annoying jdjfsjdfljsdlkfjls

SKFBSJSB IM😭😭❤️

IM GOODDD GOOD GOOD HBUU

ALSO I CANT BELIEVE I DIDNT SAY THIS BEFORE BUT THIS IS FREAKJGN BEAUTIFUL MAAM PLS SHARE A CRUMB OF TALENT

Oohh I really like that idea of an art collection!!

Woahh the poem is so dark, but the feelings come across really well

I really like that you repeat "I was there when it happened" throughout the whole poem

I think in the whole poem the flow is already much better!! It's mostly some sentences that stand out, like "the body moved hardly to the bedroom and then it stopped" and the last line doesn't really fit for me, I think the ending is stronger when you end it with everything became black

There are some parts I really like!! "I saw the tears behind the smile, I saw the h*te from the other side" and "maybe to fill out the pain, maybe to fill out my brain" are my favourite parts I think ❤

I think the whole poem could be a bit more polished, but the feelings are there and that's more important for poems like this 💕

I struggle so much with making happy poems too haha, it's just that sad feelings are so much easier to write out I guess

Oohh that's hard. Personally I do feel a lot with poems, like some poets just put their emotions in so well. I feel like the more personal a poem is, the more feelings others will get from it. But that's just how I see it.

School's just school I guess, a lot from home rn and online, but it's doable. Sometimes it can get quote stressful, but yeah.

That's pretty interesting, that you do cry with books but not with poems, but I guess that's just how it is for you haha

I actually like lots of subjects, like I really enjoy biology and English, but I also enjoy chemistry and maths, so yeah haha

AWW THANK YOU

OMG

it works now!!! ahahahhhahahahahah

YES AYA I WILL BE YOUR BESTIE

hehehe my IG stories are literally me rambling about the weirdest things ahaha

And I’m so excited for you!! I can’t wait to see what poem you come up with!!

hehe not sure if you’ve forgotten but I love in a place with lots and lots of snow, so I’m going to stay in the city over the winter

because freak accidents are very frequent here hehe

and ewwwee no way bugs 100%

ACK I CANT KEEP UP HAHA

YES I GIVE U THIS MY BESTIE 🏵🪕

if there was a jellyfish emoji I’d give it to you

but yes I’m good my busy lady

busy very busy, but quite happy hehe

crushing is such a nice feeling when I just embrace it and never act on it since I’m a coward 🥲🥲

hahahahahahah yess that’s the emoji you’d use

I get the feeling I’m going to have a sarcastic SO so is probably use 😉 way more XD

GOOD MORNING AYA

IDK IF YOU’RE AWAKE YET CUZ ITS STILL EARLY FOR U

BUT FOR ME ITS AN HOUR TO 00:00 SO THOUGHT ID SEND YOU AN EARLY MESSAGE FOR ONCE:)

My day was pretty decent, I’m stuck to online again, which really sūčks because I miss my irl friends a lot and ahh

but how are you doing? is school still in session for you?

anyways, talk soon my bestie, good night!

AHHHHH

what you said is so true omg

😭😭

Ive had so many tests recently but luckily my last exam day was today heheh

THATS SO ANNOYING OMG

WHY CANT PPL JUST PUT ON MASKS ITS NOT THAT HARD😡

AYA HRU THO

HV U BEEN DOING ALR W SKL AND LIFE🥺🥺

imysm😔💕