🖼15/1/22🖼: didn’t get much support on my previous poem that I shared with yall so here’s another attempt of me trying to get at least some feedback- I honestly don’t mind receiving any criticism because I wanna improve on my writing/poetic skills and literally anything that is considered as feedback helps, hopefully at least a few people will feedback on this (;´༎ຶٹ༎ຶ`). this poem(idk) is rather based on a love relationship that has ended many months/years ago, on how even the simplest things can remind one of the memories that are fading away, that hurt a lot but are still attached deeply to the person. how the poem came about was basically I used the pictures in the background like the monkey, the lambs etc and somehow a poem started- so credit definitely goes to carly @-thebearwiththepetals- for giving me the inspo for this poem ♡´･ᴗ･`♡

I love this poem it’s a masterpiece you are so inspiring!💚

aww this poem is so cute! and it’s such a cool idea to connect it to the collage for our collab, it fits so well !!

this is so adorable, I love the powerful imagery it conveys, like I could imagine every line. the repetitive ‘I still remember’ also adds so much power. I adore poems like this that sorta go out of the normal ‘everything has to rhyme’, they’re so nice to read and fun to write

This poem was so fun to read and just seemed so sweet. It made me sad but happy and reading the caption it made me think back on old times and memories. I don’t have any criticism besides you should just post the poem as a collage honestly. That way I think it will gain my attention because not many people look for it (even if you do mention it into the caption!) But I love this poem and the message it brings so much!