Not sure if I like it. Tell me how I could improve below please!!

Vellichor

Not sure if I like it. Tell me how I could improve below please!!

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it's amazing!! You don't need any improvements!!
I love your account!!
how do you do the boxes and lines around it?
Stick to a theme with ur letters and Backround that go 2gether
so creative
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