Bad Dan Howell sketch. Any advice to make it better?

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Bad Dan Howell sketch. Any advice to make it better?


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WOAH THIS IS SO GOOD
maybe broader shoulders?
AND DONT FORGET TO KILL EMILY! (I mean nothing... I'm a nice person...)
do you have Twitter by any chance? mine is frickinscary if you wanna follow me
Try doing more shading with lighter lines. A lot of people aren't made up of lines. Just shading. :3
np! it's rlly amazing even with out my probably bad advice
you should get it! it's really fun! unless you're not allowed to...
truuu why isn't everyone on there? THATS NOT RIGHT well i support everyone
you didnt put in his biceps😂