Pictures for inspiration will be there too๐Ÿ˜Š you may put one of them with your story if you like. Also let me know if you want feedback, i will give it if its asked for. Also, should i do writing contests?โœจ๐ŸŒ™

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Pictures for inspiration will be there too๐Ÿ˜Š you may put one of them with your story if you like. Also let me know if you want feedback, i will give it if its asked for. Also, should i do writing contests?โœจ๐ŸŒ™


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That sounds delightful, great picture choices! โค๏ธ
I really enjoyed writing that, but there is most definitely flaws. If you get the time, would you mind a bit of constructive criticism? While reading it over I knew there was something, but I couldn't pin-point it!
You should!