caption continued: to guess, tho 😂

it’s actually Keira em 😂

^6

^^* jeez autocorrect be a meanie

I love this

I have no criticism

the only thing is what is the thing telling the story, the sun, the moon, earth? or is it a mystery. do we decide what it is. I’m really bad at understanding poems so this is probably obvious what’s talking

but I love it, the poem

your welcome

ugh that’s exactly how i feel about my crush

this is so beautiful and accurate to my life 😂

duuude your username is such a lie

i love this poem so much

i really like the nature-y imagery going on, and the repetition at the end

with the “I did not love him until”

for some of the lines you could reorganize and try breaking them up into two lines. For example: And his gazes that I once found uncomfortable I know find exciting” -to - “and his gazes which I was found uncomfortable, [break] (start new line) I now find exciting”. this technique should be put into place especially when you have the repetition such as “I now...”. It would improve the pieces you’ve already written that much more

this is a great poem especially considering it’s your first!

Aw I like that

good job

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ofc!!

love this

👏🏻👏🏻

:)

this is amazing!