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This is so good! I like how it was written and now I want to know what happens next!
And for my constructive criticism (I'm doing this to everyone so if you don't want it next time just let me know); I think you could add a bit more details to help visualization. I love the way you described the cat part but I think the general details of the scene could be a bit more. But then again, this is probably because I am limiting you to a creation amount of writing so I really don't know much of the story when I go into this...