This is so good!! Absolutely love the description of the girl in the beginning ❤

This is amazing!!!! I really like the added part in the beginning with the girl and that part really kind of gave me a dreaded cold feeling- if that makes sense??? Anyway it was AMAZING and I can’t wait for the next part!!!

OH MY GOD

THE PART ABT HOW SHE NEVER LIKED CRYING AND NEVER LIKED ATTENTION BUT SOMETIMES SHE WISHED FOR ATTENTION EVEN THE SMALLEST OF IT WAS CRAFTED SO BEAUTIFULLY

YOU LITERALLY PUT THE FEELING INTO WORDS?!?!?!

AND ALSO WHAT VERMILLION IS TIED UP OH GOD

what was with that last sentence tho are u TRYNA kill me😭

your writing. you’ve been killing it. 😤👏