When Yuuki Hana(snow flower) was 1 her parents died in a car crash and she lives alone in her small apartment. She went to school and everyone bullied her because of her abnormal pink hair. Then one day she learns that she has magic abilities go control the 4 elements water, earth, air, and fire. She then goes on a mission with this boy named Haru(it means spring and I'll draw him next) and they find a magic crystal that can stop the evil bad guy Kyoko. Then after they defeat him Haru and Yuuki fall in love. the end.

please feel free to criticize my drawing. I'd like some feedback and this took me 2 hours to draw

Um...You might need some help on your drawing skills and your story... I mean it's great but there some stuff that you'd might wanna change.

Umm, I don't want this to sound rude or anything... But I feel as though her backstory might be a bit cliché/"Mary-Sue" in a way... Like where her parents died at a young age and where everyone bullied her at school... Like Cherry said, it's great! But there is room for improvement