AHH THIS IS SO GOOD 😎

This is so good. Beautiful writing! This was so fun to read, it really was! (Not fun like "oh this is a cute little story" more like "this girl can write and I love reading it!". ✨ If I had to say something for constructive criticism I think it would be for things to flow a little more. The thought process that you put into this writing was beautiful but there were a few points where I had to stop for a moment to understand the transition. Nothing too serious, just a little thing I noticed as the reader. 😊

thank you!!