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Now you can give grammar tips plz besides the )


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I'm 5ft. or 5.1ft. I can't rememberπŸ˜‚
PREACH GURL πŸ™ŒπŸ» I'll do some grammar notes in a minute πŸ˜‚
not quite sure what you mean by "would be realise"
uneffected instead of unaffected (affect is the action, effect is the end result)
full stop before "for example, girls are portrayed"
full stop after abs
somehow shorten the sentence "the above reasons of media"
also - just an idea - maybe when you're saying to delete social media or whatever, you could say something along the lines of "delete social media - or limit your time on it" idk πŸ˜‚
You're very good at writing! I loved reading it all and they have an extremely good message on our society.