OMG THIS IS SO GOOD🙌🏼🙌🏼

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I LOVE THIS SM

wow, what a really cool perspective to take on for this one. such an awesome idea and awesome execution of it. I love always being able to count on you for an amazing entry. This one is certainly no exception! And of course, the ending! It’s captivating and leaves me thinking, exactly what a good poem should do, right? I always struggle for constructive criticism with poems, since I don’t consider myself much of a poet, even though you really are making me want to try it out again. One thing I did notice is that the first half of this poem seems to lack some of the flow that the last half does. It seems a bit more choppy so maybe just work a little bit on that. Other than that, I don’t really have anything. Loved reading this, thank you for entering!

this is incredible! you’re so talented at poetry ❤️