OMGOSH ESTA ES HERMOSA ASTRID 😍 brooo this is actually so beautiful and the way i interpret it is as a toxic relationship?, I've been in a few and they really feel like this. The line "i have drunk your poison whole and i have written it back out" is so amazing

🙌🏽😩 bru ur soooo talented

THANK UUU🙈❤

thank you astrid, you really understand. thank u for the feedback, that means sm to me. thank you so so much😊❤️

“never trade honesty for relatability” wow🥺 thank u for that🖤 i’ll remember that

wowww...all of these descriptions and metaphors and different things...DAMNN. you are such a beautiful writer it’s incredible sjfbndns

ASTRID I HAVENT EVEN READ THE POEM YET BUT I HAVE TO THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR BEAUTIFUL WRITING WITH US IM EXCITED TO READ IT

ok i LOVE your repetition with “it’s all of this” and the lines that start with “it’s the” toward the end 😍 it gives the whole poem a rhythm and a pace that helps push every word forward so that the last line “i am finally free” feels like a release

I’m in LOVE with the line “it’s the blooming of the garden despite your absence” and for some reason I just really love the sound of “back out/ blackened” 🤩

sorry for writing a whole essay 😂

YES I AM ✨SO✨ PROUD OF U

“ words I hand to you in handfuls of cool dark venom”

HOLY

UR A GENIUS

🤯🤯🤯

OML

THIS WRITING IS AMAZING

yours this different on whole other level 😍😍

THIS WHOLE PIECE IS GENUIS

MORPHO BLUES AJDJDJFJFK

this makes me wanna burn all my bridges and move forward

@caption okay but Daniel ceasar really do know how to set the mood😳💕

I think this might be my fav thing you've ever wrote. All these methaphors and it flows so well. I always love the words you use. This is seriously incredible 💕

you should write a book ☺️

tienes un gran talento de verdad, eres increíble y una gran persona... Gracias pir estar en piccolage y mostrarnos tu talento 😇

Your entry for etectera_ 's games is again so good!! It's such an interesting perspective, omg. Your stories always amaze me, they're so original ❤

I DONT UNDERSTAND HOW YOU CREATE SUCH VIVID PICTURES IN MY HEAD

“it’s the dry blood leaving my fingers in the rain” khaksghshavs🤩🤩

your poetry is so deep. it paints the actual picture in my mind and just like sjskskskskka wow

Just a heads up that your first round entry for The Writing Games is due in 3 days!

wow 😍 just wow

um🤩 i have no words🤯