Ahh a cliffhanger! Don’t do that to me! I wanna know is Molly is okay! This is really good, I for sure wasn’t expecting this from the picture, which is always good! I like to be surprised, and I love this plot idea! For constructive feedback, I think it would be a good idea to redo the first two sentences. It didn’t completely make sense to me, I don’t feel like it set up the story very well. The reference of the professor isn’t very clear to me. Also, maybe mention that Molly is her daughter earlier on to establish the urgency of the situation more quickly? Other than that, this is so good and I really enjoyed reading it! Definitely a plot worth some time, thank you so much for entering! ♥️