Contest entry for @etcetera_ s writing contest, go check it out now! Any constructive criticism is welcome, it all helps so much 🖤 Just read it back and realised that it's a LITTLE dark.... (like most of my stories) Anyway, after this I might start a book, what do you think? ~Lucy x

Yay! You're a writer too. Don't worry, most of my stories are dark. I think you should start a book!

Also this is pretty good! Some places you have to many commas, but that's all I can give you!💕

Soooooooooooooo goooooooooodddddd

Yeah, my go to stories are also pretty dark! All about death and things like that!