Collage by JailynThoman

JailynThoman


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honestly, the yellow text was a really bad choice, i can't read it at all. it's also way too simple and doesn't feel like much of a collage to me. i'm gonna say no.
this collage has potential and I love how simple your style is, but I can’t say I’m a fan of this collage. the yellow text makes it a bit hard to read, and I get what you were going for with tilting the word “seagull”, but I don’t think it works with the rest of the collage. unfortunately, it’s a no from me
the yellow colour is a bit too hard to read and the way you tilted the word seagull was a bit weird but creative at the same time. however I’m giving this a no