WOAJAHA WRITING IS👌👌

UR WRITING^

WOWOOW I LOVE THISSS

you have a few unnecessary commas and places where you need to put commas but I loved this Sm!

love your writing!

same honestly 😪

ahhh don’t even worry about it, editing and stuff can easily be fixed, it’s usually the story that is harder but you aced this I can’t wait to see the other parts my man👏💛

I love the characters so far and the plot sounds intriguing <3

tysm💛 and ooo this piece is interesting🧐🧐

woah love your writing!

shfkshdb I have to know what happens next

😂😂👏

0.o go to sleep

wowwwww this is so good!

wow intriguing🤭

woah this is rlly good

heyy!! this is really good btw, what’s up?

hi! wanna be friends?💞

dang keira the tALENT- 😳👀

THIS IS SO GOOD BUT I FEEL SO BAD FOR ELLIOT POOR BOY

hi, sparkling-beaches here, and I wanted to to say that your story is really nice so far! it’s heartfelt and dipped in layers of emotion, and how you write the perspective of Elliot is really really good. I can’t wait to keep reading!