hey, since you gave me an 8, could you tell me how to improve? :)

sure thing! I actually loved your edit and I could never do something like that, despite having two years of practice with photoshop, but the reason I didn't give you a 10 was because I thought you had too much going on. I know that's a style of editing, but I have never really loved it too much. It was really just my personal opinion, nothing more. ♥️😁 Keep up with the good work!