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brilliant as usual! And yes, I could definitely relate to Amanda's emotions. I loved how Claire reacted in such a jealous yet cute way and how although we haven't seen these kinds of emotions and attention seeking behaviour from her yet, you still make it part of her. Like how she was stomping her feet and whining, although was unusual for her character, it fit in perfectly because of the way she was doing things like kids her age would. I really hope that just made sense :) also a thought for future chapters: considering Emma has had the issues with her health, perhaps if these issues and reoccurring, Claire notices she is in pain and is drawn closer to her, which will eventually make her feel like she has a responsibility to help her baby sister. When I was younger and my sister was born, I was extremely happy and really loved her, but when she could talk, she wouldn't let me go near mum because she was afraid I would steal mum off her. My mum would then say goodnight to my sister and then come and have just time with me. So another idea, could maybe be that there could be a certain allocated time that Amanda plans to spend with just her and Claire maybe every week or something. And perhaps Emma's health could play up during one of their mummy / daughter times and create some tension. Anyway just some thoughts, you definitely don't have to use them. can't wait for more xoxo❤️❤️