alright saw the pictures on the side and I’m already intrigued

woah, this is crazy, I love it. as soon as that line about them being the sun rolls around, I couldn’t tear my eyes away. you definitely have something here with that ending.

This is so beautifully written, I love it so so much ❤

oh myyy

^ yess that ending is perfect, I love the pacing of it and how the poem kind of becomes more rushed with your use of dashes and I love it and also “let’s picture me as the planets...” “you holding a gun— you as a whirlwind” 😍😍

you’re incredible 👏🏼

wow this is beautiful, everything about this is. the line"no matter how many cigarettes i lit up like candles it was not enough" is so so powerful

👏👏👏 ur talent is literally indescribable its crazy 😶

Very tight pace, and good metaphors. Like 😍🙏

this ✨ is ✨ so ✨ amazing 🥰🥰🥰

ahh I’m so glad you like all of those artists 🥰 waterparks fans are hard to find lol

lol ok that’s still good

this is incredible🥺👏🏼

WOW

speechless